TONFA- Naruto Fanfiction Forums

Bushtuckapenguin · Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 1:53 am Post subject: Tucka's All Round Emporium

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Hello and welcome to the first shop of the forums, available as a first resort because frankly, I suck. Still, I will offer what little expertise I can and encourage you to become the better option.

Merchandise
Avatars, Banners, Vexels, Story Reviews and Character Reviews

Rules:
1. All TONFA Rules Apply
2. Please don't request while the shop is closed. I may be busy in reallife or in the field so you probably won't get a reply.
4. Fill out all forms to the best of your ability. If there's not enough info you might not get what you want.
5. Currently one request per person so decide what you want carefully.
6. The password to prove you read the rule is Aconite.
7. No need to credit any art, it is appeciated though.
8. Please upload your requests to your own gallery as every two weeks I'll purge my gallery, I recommend Photobucket.com

Request an Avatar
I use vexels to draw an avatar of your OC character. For those who don't know, I redraw screenshots from here to suit your tastes. Often they look completely different from the original. You can choose the screenshot to edit or let me decide. All avatars are 100*100.

Details I require:
Hair: Hair style, including fringe/bangs description, length and colour (RBG colour codes are preferred). I use this as a reference for colours
Skin Tone:
Noticable Marks: Any scars or tattoos
Headband: Description of headband, placement, village symbol, anything special
Eyes: Colour
Clothing: The better described, the more accurate.

Request an Banner
Nothing grabs a readers attention like a neat, spiffy banner. In lieu of neat and spiffy you have me- but it may just get that second glance! To get a banner for your fanfiction or forum signature just send me these details! Get banner for either your fanfiction or forum signature just send me

Size: The default size is 450*160 and if you want something special please describe.
Summary: A summary of your story so I can do my best to suit the tone and characters involved in your fic.
Reference Pictures: Are there any specific pictures you'd like to have in your banner? Links appreciated. If not I just choose the one's I think suit.
OC Descriptions: Yes, I will draw OC's for your banner, just post the same information as described in theDo you want your own character in the banner. Similar to the Avatar description of OC, the more detailed the better and picture references appreciated.
Colours and theme: Is there a colour or theme you'd like to your banner, eg thorns, galaxy stars, red amd purple, broken mirror, sakura blossoms...

Request a Vexel
Want a reference picture for your OC? I use screenshots and official art from a variety of anime to draw examples of your characters! My only rule is I don't do recolours! I'm not brilliant, but its an effort to stop art theft on the archives. Info I need is:

Gender:
Age: Approximate age
Hair: Colour, length, style
Eyes: Colour
Skin tone: Skin colour, light, dark, tanned, olive ect
Skin Marks: Scars or tattoos
Headband: Village, colour, placement
Upper Torso: Describe the clothes of their upper body
Lower Torso: Describe the clothes of their lower body
Arms: Accessories or clothing on their arms
Legs: Accessories of their legs
Boots: Boots or shoe description
Picture references are very welcome eg: I want her hair like this with a fringe like this and a top like this except sky blue with purple highlights and a badge on it like this ect... Makes my job a lot easier.

Request a Story Review
Examples Nothing improves your story like a bit of critical analysis! This is where I shine (or so I think)!

-Don't ask if your not prepared to accept negative critisism. I'm a tactful review but I will not fawn.
-No PWP, I have no interest in reading a story that revolves around sex
-My choices in fanfiction are OC, Action and Adventure. I'm not crash-hot on romance so my reviewing may bias that way but won't be overcome by it, promise.

Just send me a link to your fanfiction, you'll get at least one review per chapter for three chapters, and each review will only be posted after I've got some commentary about my last review- just so I know my work isn't going to waste.

Request a Character Review
Examples Nothing improves your character like a bit of critical analysis! If you're worried about Suism or just want help fleshing a character out, I reckon I can help.

-Don't ask if your not prepared to accept negative critisism. I'm a tactful review but I will not fawn. I will point out Sue traits.
-I will make suggestions on how to better your character- no I'm not being controlling, I'd be pretty lousy if I didn't offer alternatives.
-I'm not fond of the long lost Uchiha Sister, the Forth member of Team Seven or characters that replace Sakura in an AU, my reviews will reflect that.

Just post a link to your OC bio.

Cheers guys, enjoy.
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salmon · Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 7:39 am Post subject:

umm... I didnt get rule 6.... could you possibly retype it so I and possibly others can understand what that means?
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Bushtuckapenguin · Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 10:53 pm Post subject:

Oops, sorry. What I meant was, if you want a banner, list it at the top of your review as RENNAB. Ta!
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Bushtuckapenguin · Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 4:54 am Post subject:

Updated guys, ready and waiting.
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wayoftheninja123 · Joined: 03 Aug 2008 Posts: 1

Gender: Female
Age: 20
Hair: Her hair needs to be exactly like the picture below, to the bottom of her shoulderblade
Eyes: Green
Skin tone: Dark tan but not brown
Skin Marks: A heart tatoo around her left eye
Headband: None
Upper Torso: A loose white top that overlaps here pants alot. It should have a zipper through the middle and a cut on here right sleeve
Lower Torso: A white belt simple.
Arms: She should have black gloves with no fingers.
Legs: Loose pants with 0 pockets. That simple
Boots: Normal sandals
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Bushtuckapenguin · Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 11:40 pm Post subject:

No worries, I'll get right too it!
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